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There is sound understanding of the task in the good presentation that you present. I feel that this could be developed further:
1. More links are needed between your products and real media conventions used across the MV, digipak and music poster.
2. As suggested try to incorporate to your evaluation any comments from the reading of academic argument into your evaluation.
3. Need an entry on your blog which addresses the evaluation question set - how have you used, developed of challenged media conventions.

Please address these points in redrafting of this work.

It is well presented in the PPT posted.